Writing Narratives

In class we are writing narratives. A narrative is when you play a main character so you use pronouns, I, Me, Mine. I have written two main naratives they are Cliff Hanger Bob and Cheeky Chimp. The genre of my writing is humour. Most narratives have a moral mine were: Cliff Hanger Bob - Don't offend orangatangs and Cheeky Chimp - never be cheeky! here is a little snippet from cheeky charlie -

"Mum! Mum! Ijust won $1000"
"Did you dear?"
"Yeah I have to text back iwth my name and adress to confirm"
I was out in the tree house laughing my head off, my reply was - GOT YOU! FROM IMP!
"OOOOOOOOO, here is my reply it says - GOT YOU! FROM IMP! WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"
I was at breaking point I had just about wet my pants, I lost my footing and AGRHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!